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Re: We need some help from you guys.

Hayden — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 12:57:44 GMT

Author: Hayden

Posted: 11/11/2012 17:57

an_outlaw wrote:

You do almost everything in music 😮 Post some of your own lyrics if you were the one who wrote them in the band. I want to see more and more from the people on BEA :shock:

I have a few songs that I co-wrote, but I'm mostly just the bass player/ saxophone player 😜

I'm making a solo album that's totally different from my previous work though...kinda folk/rock feel. The Seer kinda influenced me to do it 😁 I just want to make something colossally bad-ass sounding. I have my own lyrics in that 😄 I won't post them for another while though.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 10:40:39 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 15:40

Hayden wrote:

I always like to know bands are coming together 😄

I'm in a band right now, and we're making shitty pop/rock music. We'll have our first album out soon 🤣

As for the lyrics, without the harmonies, arrangements, etc... I can't really judge anything. But the 3rd song had my favourite lines.

You do almost everything in music 😮 Post some of your own lyrics if you were the one who wrote them in the band. I want to see more and more from the people on BEA 😲

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 10:38:24 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 15:38

Thinking about how you will sing those and how much bars will be for each line/part of line would be quite important. Take this for example:

Quote:

have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.

That's from the third song. If you or someone else in the band can sing that and make it sound great then you have an incredible vocalist in that band. I would have to pause for a breath somewhere in there.

Then again, if these have been tranlated they probably sound much more easier in the native langueage. In that case they give off a Black Sabbath and Pearl Jam vibe to me. Somewhere in between those. Number 1 could get a crowd going and number 3 has a good 4 minute + song about what it means to be once a few lines are trimmed. I would say those two are the best.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Hayden — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 09:43:40 GMT

Author: Hayden

Posted: 11/11/2012 14:43

I always like to know bands are coming together 😄

I'm in a band right now, and we're making shitty pop/rock music. We'll have our first album out soon 🤣

As for the lyrics, without the harmonies, arrangements, etc... I can't really judge anything. But the 3rd song had my favourite lines.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 08:17:16 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 13:17

toot1231 wrote:

Then why reply mate?

Why reply to any topic on a forum? I had a thought and wanted to share it. Of course it's for attention. What are you doing by making this topic? Why share a list of your favorite music? Why share art?

Re: We need some help from you guys.

toot1231 — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 07:11:55 GMT

Author: toot1231

Posted: 11/11/2012 12:11

Puncture Repair wrote:

So I guess the problem there would be that you're addressing "all" doctors, when it's only the corrupt one's you should be targeting.

This is what I wanna see, How to help fix our lyrics.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 07:09:37 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 12:09

toot1231 wrote:

We wrote than line becuase we hear all these stories about doctors like stealing Pills to get high and stuff.

So I guess the problem there would be that you're addressing "all" doctors, when it's only the corrupt one's you should be targeting.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

toot1231 — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 07:07:54 GMT

Author: toot1231

Posted: 11/11/2012 12:07

Puncture Repair wrote:

So I guess lines like

"doctors they are all fake.
nothing but an inhuman disgrace."

We wrote than line becuase we hear all these stories about doctors like stealing Pills to get high and stuff.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 07:05:21 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 12:05

toot1231 wrote:

Describe Edgy?

So lines like

"doctors they are all fake.
nothing but an inhuman disgrace."

I can't quite tell what you're trying to say. I appreciate not all lyrics need meaning behind them, but this sounds like a statement and I can't imagine why anyone would be anti-doctors when they're trying to help people if you see what I'm saying.

Whereas lines like

"And to see a ghost is to watch a man"

I think are really cool, it's mysterious and rolls off the tongue well. I enjoy how you don't know whether you're talking about a literal ghost or a metaphorical one - things like that. That line made me stop and think which is what all great lyrics do.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

toot1231 — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 07:03:15 GMT

Author: toot1231

Posted: 11/11/2012 12:03

The Poe wrote:

If your music is truly personal, nobody can tell you how to make it, change it, whatever. Otherwise it is all a waste of time... unless you are making money off it, and that's what you were in it for all along. Then, speaking personally, I'm not interested.

Then why reply mate?
We just want YOUR personal opinion wich is better you could have looked and told us and that would be all.
But, you directed all the attention onto yourself wich is never good.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 07:00:59 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 12:00

If your music is truly personal, nobody can tell you how to make it, change it, whatever. Otherwise it is all a waste of time... unless you are making money off it, and that's what you were in it for all along. Then in that case, speaking personally, I'm not interested.

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 06:56:28 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 11:56

Lyrics are always good as long as you can sing them good (not meant technically)

Re: We need some help from you guys.

toot1231 — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 06:30:25 GMT

Author: toot1231

Posted: 11/11/2012 11:30

Puncture Repair wrote:

In order I'd say 3, 2, 1.

Sometimes it really hits poetic heights, but other times it can come across like it's trying a little hard to be edgy.

Describe Edgy?

Re: We need some help from you guys.

Anonymous — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 05:53:38 GMT

Author: Anonymous

Posted: 11/11/2012 10:53

In order I'd say 3, 2, 1.

Sometimes it really hits poetic heights, but other times it can come across like it's trying a little hard to be edgy.

We need some help from you guys.

toot1231 — Sun, 11 Nov 2012 05:40:34 GMT

Author: toot1231

Posted: 11/11/2012 10:40

Hey, we just got a band together called Elected.

And we have written a few songs but, we need your help picking our best.
(i know you cannot hear the music but just lyrically which is your favorite)
Please help, this is for a bet. 😁
(note they are not finished)

1. Life
I just wanna go home and suffer and pounce upon my grave
Help! i think im in danger I need some one to save
Beat my beating heart out because its valentines day
to bad everyone around me is so lame and gay
Woah ya.

One I fought a cheeta but it just went and fled
you say I should be more careful but im better off dead
stab me with a pitchfork for simulations of life.
but I might aswel kill others while I have a knife.
Woah Ya

I told a joke to a hiyena but no sound was made.
Then I glared at the hiyena that was already decayed.
take my pincers off me and boil me alive
I guess im doing better cause im feelin fine.
yayayaya

Take me down to the river so I can swim with my friends
the fish!

2.
That golden glow that circles the sun
is nothing but a demon!

ticking time bomb full of life.
with a yellow fuse ready to ignite

that silver globe that comes out at night
it fully aware that its alive.

2 white eyes that follow me
everywhere I go it can see.

but im not scared
i have nothing to do.
in the graveyard
just bending spoons.

That floating man is not real
he cant see the pain i feel.

doctors they are all fake.
nothing but an inhuman disgrace.

just take me to a witch.
Yet I have no problem at all.
in the world with a friend.
with an upside down smile.

im hungry!
Im hungry!
more juice for my
selfish face.
Im free
im free
just locked in a cell with no key.
Insane
insane
just clueless with no brain

but im not scared
i have nothing to do.
in the graveyard
just bending spoons.

3.
All those creatures who think they are normal.
Look in the mirror and tell me what you see?
is there a figure stareing back at you?
Or is a prefect little human being.

When we were young were we tormented?
By loving all the things that we passed by
Isnt love the most hatefull thing to encounter?
Then why is love even in our lives?

And all the fire surrounds.
The temple under the grounds.

And all of the clouds
have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.
and when all those stars alligned and the split between time is when we
all finally open are eyes?
or just another painful sight?

Under control by a timeline of our lives
we dont actually live in the world we know
and look at all those goals youve been striving for
I hope you know its all just a mindless game.

And Isnt it wierd that we are actually something.
Not just cells lost and locked deep inside.
are humans just aliens with different faces
or does something really happen after we die.

And all the fire surrounds.
The temple under the grounds.

And all of the clouds
have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.
and when all those stars alligned and the split between time is when we
all finally open are eyes?
yea right.

And to see a ghost is to watch a man, when he dies where does he end?
In Hell in heaven or just fucking locked ina old beaten down building?.

And all the fire surrounds.
The temple under the grounds.

And all of the clouds
have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.
and when all those stars alligned and the split between time is when we
all finally open are eyes?

Thanks, Not sure if this was supposed to be posted in music but, we are a band.
and hope to release one of these as a single.