Rate Some of My Song Lyrics

toot1231 · 2013-03-17T22:52:54-04:00

Ima just post my song lyrics here I want you guys to rate them and tell me if you like them. 1/5 ratings please. 1.theres someone behind my back when i break my spine, it dosnt grow back. im fine without out it i dont even care. the dream cloud is over there fall away far far away from heaven. and fall away thee. far away from, the fall away from thee. so please come in have some tea and bring in all the demons you have. take me to the colors that surround you. and get me closer to them I wanna walk away and tell my friends to leave within this web we weaved growing concience talking dead. when im not paranoid im talking to them. just leave, let me be. shes in the coffin let her sleep. far away far far away from heaven. and far away thee. far away from, the far away from thee. so please come in have some tea and bring in all the demons you have. take to me to the colors that surround you. and get me closer to them I wanna walk away and tell my friends to leave within a web im weaving. and shes talking in her sleep. waiting for me. i hear her crying. please come to me. if theres 1 thing i wanna know when we die where do we go i hear them, they speak to you mortals cant hear them but they hear you. somewhere near the giving tree beside the falling leaves growing skys with hollowed eyes they can feel you now. 2.Today was like any other day. I thought of thoughts then they went away. i had friend but never told him he was just fake. got a knife from behind my back now i wont listen to a thing i said Good morning sunshine why are you away I thought it was gonna be a good day. Good night Moon i know you're sad. but you could be a hero if i knew what you said. but you know...x5 Hello my friend it has been along time still trying to find that same bright light Hello my friend its been a ruff night just lay your head and turn off the lights. Hello my friend how are you today seems my life is not gonna change. Hello my friend I love myself more than anyone i know, thats why i have no where to go I hate my relatives but thats ok I just hate them because i cant relate. a knife to cut you in your sleep its alright you wont feel a thing. Make me up, and make me out Im still living with tons of doubt I know more than you will ever know I do nothing to concern myself I know the way I know the way but you know... Hello my friend it has been along time still trying to find that same bright light Hello my friend its been a ruff night just lay you head and turn of the lights. 3.theres puppet strings controlling my brain Makes me feel like im going insane You are nothing compared to me I wanna kill you I read your mind why wont you believe me Im alive and im doin fine with my own time in my life Im alive and im doin fine with my own time in my mind The obstacles are far away from me I wanna teach you how to keep all those secrets close to me I wanna steal you And im alive and im fine why wont you believe Im alive and im doin fine with my own time in my mind Ooo I feared this Ooo I feared this ooo and I feel this this salt this salt this sand this salt this salt the land

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Hayden Profile
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First song was my favourite.

And you have some good lines 😄 But don't limit yourself just to direct one or two syllable rhymes. Just my advice 😄
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