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- #1
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:26
- Post subject: Check out this song our band made in 20 minutes!
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrTAzUMK0Iw
Will you give us feed back on how to improve our writing and what not...?
We had one mic so thats why it sounds so Shtty but yea just tell us what you think.
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AlexZangari
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- #2
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:35
- Post subject: Re: Check out this song our band made in 20 minutes!
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| toot1231 wrote: | | feed back on how to improve our writing |
Don't write songs in 20 minutes.
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MrFrogger
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- #3
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:36
- Post subject: Re: Check out this song our band made in 20 minutes!
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| toot1231 wrote: | http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrTAzUMK0Iw
Will you give us feed back on how to improve our writing and what not...?
We had one mic so thats why it sounds so Shtty but yea just tell us what you think. |
Don't take the advice of that youtube commenter.
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- #4
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:45
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Well we were just playing random stuff and it actually evolved from playing Green day - Brain stew somehow.
we were trying to make a country version of brain stew and this came out i thought it was a pretty cool jam session
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AlexZangari
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- #5
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:50
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Not trying to put you down or anything, that's just my advice. Sometimes songwriting involves a lot of tweaking. Pumping something out in twenty minutes doesn't mean it's gonna be crap, but giving it a little extra love can really bring it to a new level.
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- #6
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:50
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| AlexZangari wrote: | | Not trying to put you down or anything, that's just my advice. Sometimes songwriting involves a lot of tweaking. Pumping something out in twenty minutes doesn't mean it's gonna be crap, but giving it a little extra love can really bring it to a new level. |
We werent really trying to make a masterpiece or anything.
this is just a test to see if we can really make songs of our own. if you check my channel this is the only orignial thing we have all done together.
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AlexZangari
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- #7
- Posted: 09/15/2013 03:51
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Of course I'm a pretty shitty songwriter so maybe you should just ignore me.
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nitro2k11
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- Posted: 09/15/2013 16:13
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I actually liked it alot, other than the vocals.
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19loveless91
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- #9
- Posted: 09/15/2013 17:54
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It's alright but seems rushed. Like you would make it in 10 minutes.
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Facetious
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- #10
- Posted: 09/17/2013 16:32
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| nitro2k11 wrote: | | I actually liked it alot, other than the vocals. |
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