BrandonMeow's Writing (Maybe you'll like it?)

Anonymous · 2013-04-25T17:36:21-04:00

Hello, this thread is where I am going to post a little bit of my writing. I hope you guys enjoy it, and I'd love feedback... I used to write lots of poetry, but I've sort of moved from poetry to prose since I feel like prose is less restricting, and I'm terrible at rhyme scheme, meter, and so on. That's why most of my poems are free verse. Also, I am fond of nonsense, whimsy, and fantasy, so if you don't like that, this may be a bit offputting. This is probably my favourite, so I'll post it and see what you guys think, and post more if you like it: "The king with wires in his crown, plays a game of chess with the twig-crowned king across the river. And the queen with the dress of silken sandpaper watches from the side. Laughing at the long lawns of Sisyphean mice-men with cold fingers and moldy minds The piper poops from his fable fingers, his mouth and his nose, Like a shooting arrow of simple-sounds and laughs of shattering glass. His hood is as gray as his skin, and his palm prints shaped like crescent moons. His handkerchief is hollowed from a silken flag made of melting princes. Silly geese eat the bad children all in a whole biting motion. The taste is like the feel of wind on your face and fruit in your cheeks, they say. Robin Hood did hang from the gallows, but still gives to the poor, as they feast off his numb limbs. The fox hunt is in session, the howling hoodlums are the kings and wisecracks. The wise sea-queen made from driftwood and cans of carnival flavored beans, lifts a baby from the water, an offering to Zeus in the sky. He gets a little hungry in his godly god tummy when spelunking in Aphrodite’s caves, And with a strike from his bolt, he molts off his shell and becomes a new deity for the day, maybe Jehovah. The moon blooms like a flower in Hell, and sets all the Hades and Satans and things to zealots in brown hats, drinking brown molasses. The brute-knights yank on the swords in the stones, but the serfs snort the stones. Long fingers tap on wooden pianofortes and the composers have a seizure, creating symphonies of cacophony. And the birds did chirp, shirk, hiccup, and flutter fly away like a thousand living bowties. The king with the wires in his crown, was in a pickle after all, And the twig-king got a checkmate and laughed at the wire-king’s troubles. And his troubles were thus: his queen was a witch with her legs straddling the lances. And the king loosely flipped his hands in the empty pools of alimony acid baths. The whispering wheelbarrows told the secrets of the mandatory monotony of castle life to all, Then the whole placed laughed and burst like bladders of fire, their faces red as the salamander’s feet were stomping all along the ground, the marble an’ the dirt, and the tears were streaming like little men marching, and the pain of living turned to another day in march hare territory, and the baggy ol' ladies sitting around in circles told each other things that no one cared for, since the meandering moon was drunken and vomiting out of the valleys, the plateaus were rising from the foothills once more. So the twig-king sat in a tree with the baby-bone wind-chimes singing with sobs and the trees were away with the trends of things, He lifted his furry arms and clapped, once, twice, three times, till he sighed, “Oh well”"

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Hey, does that mean my sig is the only remaining evidence of Pam's post?

Also, great poem, Puncture/Calamity Cat.

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Mercurydylan89 wrote:

Go and deal with real people the way you deal with people on the Internet and see how that works for you.

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Mercurydylan89 wrote:

This.

It's pathetic. Go and deal with real people the way you deal with people on the Internet and see how that works for you. It's antisocial and is destructive and is not at all cool or "edgy"or interesting or funny. It's fucking disgusting. If you feel the need to attack or ridicule someone else, that's a sign that you should go get a real life and leave.

lol, but srs, anyone who makes a big fucking deal about people's behaviour on the net is not only a massively oversensitive pussy but also needs to gtfoutside. Think it might be you who requires a "real life", mate.
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BrandonMeow wrote:

Now can we get the thread back on topic to something slightly writing related?

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We can close threads all day. This needs to stop.
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