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Poll: Nice Cover?
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Hayden

Location: Vietnam
Canada
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:38
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🤣 .

Well, my Recording Technology teacher is giving us a final project worth around 70% of of final mark 😕 , We just have to make an album with about 4-5 songs on it, basic enough.

But, I figured because I have a whole bunch of experienced people here, I wouldn't mind if you criticized my work as much as possible, ways to improve, etcc..

Like..you don't have to 🫢 It'd just help me out a bit.

I haven't done much, but I assume I'm going to be making a jazz album...(cause I can't sing ....I can kinda rap, but not really 😨 ), so I'll just be playing Sax, Drums, and w/e other instrument I can pick-up in the next few months.

This is my album cover in it's current form:



Album Back in current form:



Tell me what ya think 😄

EDIT:

The album's music shall be a mixture of Jazz & Shoegaze, first EXAMPLE clip is out:


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GARY

Brunei Darussalam
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:44
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Is that smoke through a window?
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Hayden

Location: Vietnam
Canada
  • #3
  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:46
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GARY wrote:
Is that smoke through a window?


Ya 😄 Well, i took the picture, and it's gone through a few stages of photoshop, but it's supposed to look like smoke through a window.

But, at the same time, the cover can be looked at in two ways. Either you're looking into a room of smoke from the outside, or you're in a room, looking outside to smoke.

I thought it was crafty 😨
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GARY

Brunei Darussalam
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:48
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I owe $100,000 and wasted 4 years of my life.

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Hayden

Location: Vietnam
Canada
  • #5
  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:50
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GARY wrote:



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😉
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GARY

Brunei Darussalam
  • #6
  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:51
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Hayden wrote:


so I'll just be playing Sax, Drums, and w/e other instrument I can pick-up in the next few months.






Sound like you have a fun class there Hayden.

I never had one of those 🙁

I was wondering what exactly you meant by your quote I used here.

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Wombi
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:51
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It'll look great once words are up on it - just to stae the obvious 😨 .
Taric
Gender: Male

Age: 32

Netherlands
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 14:57
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It's a bit too... blackish I think.
Guess if the window size would be bigger, it'd look better.

And a pro for words on it. Lots of words.
Wombi
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 15:00
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I think keep the window the same size (negative space isn't a terrible thing) gives room for big beautiful words but I agree it is too black (never thought I'd say that) If you can you should change the black. I was going to say to a wood look but since you want to keep the ambiguity of whether its inside or outside (which is very cool 😄 ) maybe not
GARY

Brunei Darussalam
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  • Posted: 10/10/2011 15:01
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FORGET ABOUT THE DAMN COVER 🤬


WHAT ABOUT THE MUSIC

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