Check out this song our band made in 20 minutes!

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toot1231
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrTAzUMK0Iw



Will you give us feed back on how to improve our writing and what not...?
We had one mic so thats why it sounds so Shtty but yea just tell us what you think.
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feed back on how to improve our writing


Don't write songs in 20 minutes.
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toot1231 wrote:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zrTAzUMK0Iw



Will you give us feed back on how to improve our writing and what not...?
We had one mic so thats why it sounds so Shtty but yea just tell us what you think.

Don't take the advice of that youtube commenter.
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Well we were just playing random stuff and it actually evolved from playing Green day - Brain stew somehow.

we were trying to make a country version of brain stew and this came out i thought it was a pretty cool jam session

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Not trying to put you down or anything, that's just my advice. Sometimes songwriting involves a lot of tweaking. Pumping something out in twenty minutes doesn't mean it's gonna be crap, but giving it a little extra love can really bring it to a new level.
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Not trying to put you down or anything, that's just my advice. Sometimes songwriting involves a lot of tweaking. Pumping something out in twenty minutes doesn't mean it's gonna be crap, but giving it a little extra love can really bring it to a new level.
We werent really trying to make a masterpiece or anything.
this is just a test to see if we can really make songs of our own. if you check my channel this is the only orignial thing we have all done together.
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Of course I'm a pretty shitty songwriter so maybe you should just ignore me.
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I actually liked it alot, other than the vocals.
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It's alright but seems rushed. Like you would make it in 10 minutes.
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I actually liked it alot, other than the vocals.
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