We need some help from you guys.

[toot1231]

Hey, we just got a band together called Elected.

And we have written a few songs but, we need your help picking our best.
(i know you cannot hear the music but just lyrically which is your favorite)
Please help, this is for a bet.
(note they are not finished)

1. Life
I just wanna go home and suffer and pounce upon my grave
Help! i think im in danger I need some one to save
Beat my beating heart out because its valentines day
to bad everyone around me is so lame and gay
Woah ya.

One I fought a cheeta but it just went and fled
you say I should be more careful but im better off dead
stab me with a pitchfork for simulations of life.
but I might aswel kill others while I have a knife.
Woah Ya


I told a joke to a hiyena but no sound was made.
Then I glared at the hiyena that was already decayed.
take my pincers off me and boil me alive
I guess im doing better cause im feelin fine.
yayayaya


Take me down to the river so I can swim with my friends
the fish!


2.
That golden glow that circles the sun
is nothing but a demon!

ticking time bomb full of life.
with a yellow fuse ready to ignite

that silver globe that comes out at night
it fully aware that its alive.

2 white eyes that follow me
everywhere I go it can see.

but im not scared
i have nothing to do.
in the graveyard
just bending spoons.


That floating man is not real
he cant see the pain i feel.

doctors they are all fake.
nothing but an inhuman disgrace.

just take me to a witch.
Yet I have no problem at all.
in the world with a friend.
with an upside down smile.

im hungry!
Im hungry!
more juice for my
selfish face.
Im free
im free
just locked in a cell with no key.
Insane
insane
just clueless with no brain

but im not scared
i have nothing to do.
in the graveyard
just bending spoons.

3.
All those creatures who think they are normal.
Look in the mirror and tell me what you see?
is there a figure stareing back at you?
Or is a prefect little human being.

When we were young were we tormented?
By loving all the things that we passed by
Isnt love the most hatefull thing to encounter?
Then why is love even in our lives?

And all the fire surrounds.
The temple under the grounds.

And all of the clouds
have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.
and when all those stars alligned and the split between time is when we
all finally open are eyes?
or just another painful sight?

Under control by a timeline of our lives
we dont actually live in the world we know
and look at all those goals youve been striving for
I hope you know its all just a mindless game.



And Isnt it wierd that we are actually something.
Not just cells lost and locked deep inside.
are humans just aliens with different faces
or does something really happen after we die.


And all the fire surrounds.
The temple under the grounds.

And all of the clouds
have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.
and when all those stars alligned and the split between time is when we
all finally open are eyes?
yea right.

And to see a ghost is to watch a man, when he dies where does he end?
In Hell in heaven or just fucking locked ina old beaten down building?.

And all the fire surrounds.
The temple under the grounds.

And all of the clouds
have passed by my house before one evening when I wasnt even born.
and when all those stars alligned and the split between time is when we
all finally open are eyes?


Thanks, Not sure if this was supposed to be posted in music but, we are a band.
and hope to release one of these as a single.

[Puncture Repair]

In order I'd say 3, 2, 1.

Sometimes it really hits poetic heights, but other times it can come across like it's trying a little hard to be edgy.

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[Borve Baunehoj]

Lyrics are always good as long as you can sing them good (not meant technically)

[Guest]

If your music is truly personal, nobody can tell you how to make it, change it, whatever. Otherwise it is all a waste of time... unless you are making money off it, and that's what you were in it for all along. Then in that case, speaking personally, I'm not interested.

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