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JMan
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- #41
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:02
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| BrandonMeow wrote: | | I think I'm going to keep it. We'll see. There'll probably be more to it than her just eating him for no reason...I'm not sure. |
If you plan on keeping it, you can include some backstory as to why she would even consider eating someone, especially her own son. A backstory such as the mother starting to go insane after the death of her husband.
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Guest
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- #42
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:03
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| JMan wrote: | | If you plan on keeping it, you can include some backstory as to why she would even consider eating someone, especially her own son. A backstory such as the mother starting to go insane after the death of her husband. |
Or maybe a backstory such as - she was hungry.
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JMan
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- #43
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:06
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| BrandonMeow wrote: | | Or maybe a backstory such as - she was hungry. |
Isn't there a kitchen?
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- #44
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:07
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| JMan wrote: | | Isn't there a kitchen? |
Probably. But who eats kitchens?
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GeevyDallas
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- #45
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:08
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| JMan wrote: | | Isn't there a kitchen? |
What are you trying to say?All women belong in the kitchen?How fucking sexist JMan.
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Happymeal
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- #46
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:47
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| JMan wrote: | | "Her birthday present was in a box 2 inches high' and about nine inches long and 11 inches high. |
So, was it eleven inches high or two inches high? Or was it twoleven?
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Defago
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- #47
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:52
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@JMan, beautiful read. Thank you. Why do you feel the need to repeat you're not gay every 5 posts, though? Are things going badly with DLGGLD? You can talk to me, you know.
@Brandon, that was very Gabriel Garcia Marquez-y. Why is there a wall/who put it there/what does it symbolyze?
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- #48
- Posted: 04/26/2013 02:58
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| Defago wrote: | @JMan, beautiful read. Thank you. Why do you feel the need to repeat you're not gay every 5 posts, though? Are things going badly with DLGGLD? You can talk to me, you know.
@Brandon, that was very Gabriel Garcia Marquez-y. Why is there a wall/who put it there/what does it symbolyze? |
Yes, I know, haha. There are many more elements to the story that I haven't really expanded on yet, but I'm hoping it will add a little bit more to it, and it won't seem so much like One Hundred Years of Solitude.
I'm not really sure quite yet.  It's definitely an important part of the story, so it has to be more than just a random wall. I'll be thinking about it. And another thing, by the very end of the story, the wall is gone and the boy goes out into the world. It kind of forced the character to look around himself, and see that there is beauty and adventure in everything, everywhere, and that you don't always have to leave where you are to find it. So when the wall is gone, he can go out and he'll truly appreciate every little detail of life.
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Defago
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- #49
- Posted: 04/26/2013 03:19
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If you guys will bear with me changing the thread topic a bit, I just finished reading The Stranger by Camus. While I don't like his style of writing in the least, the moral/philosophical tones and Mersault's worldview are fascinating to say the least.
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JMan
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- #50
- Posted: 04/26/2013 04:32
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| Defago wrote: | | @JMan, beautiful read. Thank you. Why do you feel the need to repeat you're not gay every 5 posts, though? Are things going badly with DLGGLD? You can talk to me, you know. |
He and I are ONLY FRIENDS, AND THAT'S ALL WE'LL EVER BE! SHUT IT! I hate these jokesm, and if one more happens I will report it as harassment.
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